Капитализм

[MC]

Капитализм means Capitalism in Russian. This is a symbolic gfx piece I made and I would like everyone to take a shot at finding the symbolism in my piece.

v1.


v2.

[slick]

Im sorry MC but i think you are loosing your touch.......I really dont like this one i dont like that there is a white border around the animal and i think you could have more depth on the Dolphin and then i think you should get rid of the white border and put black but honestly i dont like it i rate it 4/10 sorry........... but keep trying and i like the background too

[Richi]

not what I usually see from you Mc
I don't get the concept and there is no flow or dpeth or cool effects,
not even like the colors I see some green and it looks out of place on the sig and
honeslty what I see here is a dolphin plushie on a background
you can do much better MC it isn't that bad as slick said but not what we usually see
by you

[shiinta]

I like it.
The soft plush of the dolphin, passive creature by nature, contrasts well with the harsh, polluted background (Capitalism?). In the second version, what seems like a beam of light is shining through the polluted background on to the dolphin. I've taken a liking to the green strokes as well, though I cannot explain why. The only element I would recommend you improve on is the white border around the dolphin. It is a bit took think.

[Juggs]

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I am a little perplexed. Um, let's start positive. I like the text.
However, you should know that centring focals doesn't work unless it's symmetrical. There needs to be better flow. I honestly look at it, and wonder what you were trying to achieve here, cause I am unsure. the white border around the dolphin, is definitely a throwback. doesn't sit right. I like that there is some depth. however, the effects don't really suit the focal. sorry mc, don't think this worked, nice attempt though.

[chia]

I dont really like the white stroke
and dont see how this concept works with that render
I dont think the colours fit with the render either, maybe old dirty reds
Like the text though

[Laura]

This one has a better border.
Text is okay but maybe the russian words should go first, that's the main text.
Like the others, the effects don't really match to the render and the dolphin with that border is being killed.
Not your best, you can do better. :/

[TripelS]

I dont like the border... dont think it really matches with the concept of this sig.
But I do not understand the concept so I may be wrong. I agree with laura that the main text should go first.. The effects and flow and depth need work...

Also not really your best...