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 was kinda trying something. that didn't work properly xD but whatever. rate?
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The arms of the render looks weird D: and the render looks blurried
nice effects on the background and good text overall is a nice piece June!
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I cracked up at the render.
 I don't quite understand what is going on with this one, love. The lowered opacity of the text is not appealing to me. On the sides, the render is poorly cut. I think the background is pretty random as well. Lacking flow, lacking depth. Baby, you can do so much betterrrr. Good colors and nice general concept. Just make it a little cleaner.
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well... its supposed to be messed, its part of the concept
and it would look lots worse 'clean' D: thanks still working on it  [Auto-Merged Double Post]  2nd version cleaned some crap, 100% opacity at the text, tried to fix the render
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Psh, you said it would look worse being cleaner.
It looks a lot better.
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seems overtopazed( i think ), I know you are going for the messy look, but it lacks any sense of flow.
and that black thing to the left of him needs to be blurred some more, kind of attentiongrabbing(ish)
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I think this signature would look good with vector brushes and etc.
The signature is way messed, and it doesn't look good. And all the effects are going on different directions. Anyway, I don't like the concept you chose about everything messy 
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I think the 2nd version is better than the first, but I still think everything is messy. Try focusing everything on one direction and also everything still seems like too low opacity.
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tha dudes arms looks like they were copied and pasted onto him, i suggest... add some depth to the bg and perhaps try a different font, or maybe just not have the font not so 'ghosted'.
nice concept tho, keep it up!
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