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Awh, "The Illness" you added is quite amazing aswell!
I like it! Your going to have like a whole Mothers Life Chronicles! your very talented! :] lovely! |
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Idk.. I just feel the flow of it is weird.. just can't pinpoint where exactly.. T_T
But yup.. I am gonna do a mum chronicles thing, that's why i can't submit one of these poems for the poetry competition, cos i wanna post them HERE
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nice second poem. try adding something with a lullaby
or waking up at midnight or something. |
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Oh ya! I forgot.. Thanks for the inspiration
![]() Baby = need milk = mummy can't sleep.. lol
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waaa, you make me more emo juju.. T.T
*sulks in one corner* waaaa *runs for mumi*
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Haha
![]() So I guess the poem touched your heart? ![]()
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