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Old 08-19-2008   #21
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Awh, "The Illness" you added is quite amazing aswell!
I like it!
Your going to have like a whole
Mothers Life Chronicles!
your very talented!
:] lovely!
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Old 08-19-2008   #22
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Idk.. I just feel the flow of it is weird.. just can't pinpoint where exactly.. T_T

But yup.. I am gonna do a mum chronicles thing, that's why i can't submit one of these poems for the poetry competition, cos i wanna post them HERE
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nice second poem. try adding something with a lullaby or waking up at midnight or something.
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Old 08-19-2008   #24
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Oh ya! I forgot.. Thanks for the inspiration

Baby = need milk = mummy can't sleep.. lol
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waaa, you make me more emo juju.. T.T

*sulks in one corner*
waaaa
*runs for mumi*
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Old 08-19-2008   #26
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Haha
So I guess the poem touched your heart?
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